Pokfe: You do know first, we have to unlock the Key
Coxer: Yes, but their are enemies that can stop us.
Stinger: Such as Sharpedge, you know the last time we met him
Coxer: Yes, he defeated me, but brothers we will succeed
we've never failed.
Coxer: Well done, brothers. But pack your weapons
Stinger: Okay, but why must we serve Sokore
Coxer: Because, his path may lead us to Motex
Coxer: Soon, my time will begin and Motex will be revived
Coxer: My Lord (thinking, imbecile), our
progress has been efficient, we have captured
Tantra, but when Pokfe was released, our brother
Sharpedge was released as well.
Omega Sokore: Then kill him, we cannot have an
enemy as powerful as you, my apprentice.
Tantra: I....'m ..to weak...and this stuff is gross
Pokfe: I'm opening the hatches, put him in Stinger
Stinger: Pokfe, unleash the hatches
Pokfe: Right
Tantra: nnnoooooooonnnnnooooo
Tantra: He's too strong
2 comments:
Cool. Try to use punctuations more to show more feeling affect.
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Okay Onewa80, thanks for the advice.
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